tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926966887853238503.post2567319775746579923..comments2023-03-26T17:40:55.647-04:00Comments on Evidence From the Car Crash: Beginning to Revenge Thriller by Daniel SmallegangeDaniel Car Crashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06260515302322584834noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926966887853238503.post-52510410789128915742011-05-15T01:18:02.189-04:002011-05-15T01:18:02.189-04:00Thanks. The paragraphs are bunched together due to...Thanks. The paragraphs are bunched together due to font issues.But it is written maybe bunchey to be intense??Daniel Car Crashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06260515302322584834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3926966887853238503.post-83929727809083112872011-05-15T01:14:12.433-04:002011-05-15T01:14:12.433-04:00I like it, it's intense. The perspective you w...I like it, it's intense. The perspective you wrote from gave me the sense of reading a manuscript. Is it? Suggestion: The sentences are bunched together, which makes it difficult to read. I would add some spacing-other than that, i would not mind reading more.<br /><br />AlorsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com